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[OW] Dion Headshot by devinaaa [OW] Dion Headshot by devinaaa
Headshot of Dion deary~~ Hope you guys like how he looks~! (yes, it's a guy ouo)
Any feedback/critiques for my drawing?
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kittensparadise Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013  Student General Artist
I.. Itu cowok? Cantik banget! >w<
Coloringnya juga keren, kesannya manis~ <3
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devinaaa Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013
kjasdfhlkasdfhlkasdj-- T-Terima kasiiih! :iconcryforeverplz:
(I-Iya, Dion itu cowok >< ehehehe--)
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kittensparadise Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013  Student General Artist
Sama-sama ^^
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Colby-Arrow Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013   General Artist
(( Really good, nice quality. Bit weird on the edges, but nice. :iconbravoplz:))
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covert15 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I like those eyes!

Okay so here is a little critique.
I think it's much to pixelated. If you drew this all on the computer make sure when you open a new document to draw it on it should be at least 400 pixels. I like to work with 600 though. Also the eyes are lovely but too feminine. They should be a little more angular. This might help you out. [link] Of course they don't have to be this sharp and angular. You could have them be softer for a younger look. But if you are looking for an elegant bishie boy you should try to go with a long face, narrow eyes and a long nose. This will help a lot.

I hope that was some what helpful! Keep up the good work! It does look really nice.
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devinaaa Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013
Thanks!

E-er, actually, I made it on the iPad, so I can't really control the pixelation :iconrazycryplz:
Thanks for the tip, though! I'll keep it in mind~!

Hngg... actually, I don't mean to be offensive to anyone, but I don't like that kind of style, and he's meant to look like a girl ^^
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covert15 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Student Digital Artist
You're welcome!

Oh okay. No offence. Just doing my best to give a helpful critique. hehehe Keep up the good work.
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devinaaa Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013
Yeah~ OuO
No offense taken~ I know you're just doing your job~ owo
Thanks~!!
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covert15 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Student Digital Artist
hahaha You're welcome!
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Who-I-AmI Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013
DIONNNNNNN I WANT TO DO YOUR HAIR *in like a a freakin french braid~*

Scratch that I WANT YOUR HAIR!
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devinaaa Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013
I'll lend him to you if you'd trade me your Dakoeda bby :iconheplz:
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Who-I-AmI Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013
You mean I get a whole Dion for the price of one Dakoeda QAQ
FFfff I wouldn't find a better bargain anywhere else!
*Puts down the Dakoeda deposit and zips off with Dion!*
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devinaaa Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
OAO W-Why would you even....
B-but 10% bargains anywhere else is better than this derp o - o
But if you put it that way...
:iconheplz:well hello there.
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Who-I-AmI Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013
I would pay full price for Dion any day Q3Q

Dakoeda: *starreess* Why hello to you too :iconheplz:
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devinaaa Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
:iconspazattackplz: th-that's the first... //all the grateful :iconcryforeverplz:

//sneaks off into the night dragging Dakoeda bby along
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Who-I-AmI Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013
Muweheheheeee x3

//grabs a tissue and waves the two of you bon voyage~
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livban Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013
Dion <3
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devinaaa Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013
Dion: Y-Yes?
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livban Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013
You're so pretty :; u;
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devinaaa Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013
Dion::iconreactionzoomplz: Y-You must have m-me mistaken f-for somebody else, m-madam. ^u^"
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livban Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013
Nuuuuu it's trueeeee!
So beautifulllllll~
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C0SMIC--galaxy Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Student General Artist
She's gorgeous! :iconamgplz: <3333
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devinaaa Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013
Th-Thank you :iconoldschoolownedplz:~!!
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SKShigan Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
Wow, lovely!! :aww: :tighthug:
May I ask what program did u use to make this pretty job? :?
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devinaaa Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
:iconsupertackleplz: Th-thank you!
I used SketchbookPro on the iPad for this~
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SGYu Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013   Digital Artist
My 2 cents

-I think you could smooth out/blend the strokes a bit more, some more work could be done for the hair
-Some parts of the lineart are still visible, paint over them like you did for the chin. In my opinion your final product I think shouldn't have the lineart visible, it is there only to act as a guide.
- Is that green spot on the ear meant to be there?

- I also notice some parts of the color pop up outside of the lineart. Clean those up and it should be ok.
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devinaaa Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
Thanks for the tips~ I actually sort of /meant/ for some of the things you commented on to look like how it is, like the lineart and the green spot, which I wanted for it to be a cuff for his earring. I never meant for it to be CG, actually ^//^;; and the parts that pop out of the lineart were the parts that failed to crop properly. Otherwise, thanks for the feedback!
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SGYu Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013   Digital Artist
No problem =)
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