Okay so here is a little critique. I think it's much to pixelated. If you drew this all on the computer make sure when you open a new document to draw it on it should be at least 400 pixels. I like to work with 600 though. Also the eyes are lovely but too feminine. They should be a little more angular. This might help you out. [link] Of course they don't have to be this sharp and angular. You could have them be softer for a younger look. But if you are looking for an elegant bishie boy you should try to go with a long face, narrow eyes and a long nose. This will help a lot.
I hope that was some what helpful! Keep up the good work! It does look really nice.
-I think you could smooth out/blend the strokes a bit more, some more work could be done for the hair -Some parts of the lineart are still visible, paint over them like you did for the chin. In my opinion your final product I think shouldn't have the lineart visible, it is there only to act as a guide. - Is that green spot on the ear meant to be there?
- I also notice some parts of the color pop up outside of the lineart. Clean those up and it should be ok.
Thanks for the tips~ I actually sort of /meant/ for some of the things you commented on to look like how it is, like the lineart and the green spot, which I wanted for it to be a cuff for his earring. I never meant for it to be CG, actually ^//^;; and the parts that pop out of the lineart were the parts that failed to crop properly. Otherwise, thanks for the feedback!